Letter to a recruiter
To: kevin.griffin@imate.com
Subject: Your job posting on Monster.com
"Hiring for this position is very competitive, so a quality 1st impression from resume & cover letter is key."
As a QA professional with 10 years industry experience, including three at Expedia, I would be disinclined to apply for a job posting with as many grammatical errors as yours contained. May I advise that you have a colleague review these before you post them? I've forwarded the job listing to a board that I run but I'm afraid the text as seen on Monster makes I-mate look unprofessional and chaotic.